OMG!!!! Thats beautiful!!! I can't wait to read this! :)
I think it's a little bit awkward, if I'm honest. I liked the UK one more so I'll be interested to see that.
I think that its all wrong for this book, I mean don't get me wrong, the scene is absolutely gorgeous, but you just said that every night in the UNDERWORLD is forever. If you don't want to change the picture then I would change the script. Something about love and pain probably, but if you really like the script you already have then I would go for a picture in a desert. You said that the Underworld was barren and seemed to go on forever. that is what I really had in mind. This is totally your decision, but if you want my opinion I say change the picture or the script. I don't mean to be rude, but I have been told that I was blunt before.
I'm in love with this book and preordered the 3rd one. Even though it was a sequel, it had a completely different feel from the first book. They are so different but I think this one is my favorite book of Angelina yet.